कह दो शिखा मेरे बारे में…
वाह प्रेम की अद्भुत धारा बह चली है खामोश राहों को तकते हुए… आशा को देखते हुए… पुकार को आजमाते हुए…
आपका जो उपर का विश्लेषण था उस के अनुसार कविता का मर्म ज्यादा ही खुलकर सामने आया…
एकचित्र उभरा मन और उड़ चला जीवन की तलाश में…।
बहुत बढ़िया. लिखती रहें.
I LOVE YOUR POETRY.KEEP IT UP.
nice words…………nice poem.. and inspiring thoughts
the yearning to meet after decades
to look at eachother wistfully
and walk on as if
strangers
emotions tugging at heart
nostalgia building up on the moments
as the moments depart..
one look …oh ! just once
a skewed smile ..a dry cough
the eyes saying byes
the heart asking whys
but nonetheless
the two walked off each other’s life
as someone’s husband
as someone else’s wife
Mukul
i am very thankful 2 God that he gave u such a beautiful thoughts & thinking’s i loved ur wordings that u hv used in ur lines ,& feeled that pain in ur shayari ’s well u written nice phrase’s keep it up ,yeh dua hai hamari khuda se ,yunhi likhte rahiye
kya baat hai hoozoor aap ki
pyar karne vale kabe nahi marte wo to aamar ho jate hai
Dont knw d exact wordin….got 4m sum1….
well…visted ur blog 1st time…Ok Ma’am.
i like u poetry stylle….it touched my emotions…….thanks to do so……well best of luck for ur blog……
Hi Shikha,
I just came here for reading more on hindi poem & got your poems.
Its a really a nice peom , feeling which resides in heart definetly yours.:). Really a good work…Can somebody suggest more collection om motivational, life or Inspirational. I am a great fan of at that catogary.
August 11, 2007 at 10:58 am
really nice work .. !