42 Responses to "Chaand ki Tarah Pyaar bhi!!!"
salut ca va had sit hama9ni bazaf tbarkla 3likom walah
thnx… bahoot acha hai… i liked it–
I realy enjoy ur poem its realy gham ki isi tarah likha kare. luv u by zobia
I luv u 2 z.thank so much
ek bewafa ke zakhmo pe marhum lagane hum gaye.
marhume ke qasam mahum na mela marhum ke jaga mar hum gye
Hey! Yo! I’m Tarah too! Nice.
very good shikha ji kya baat hai pad kar kafi accha laga jo dard ke sath mehboob ka pyar isme dikha sach main dil ko choo gaya
i really like this
Shikha ji
This is lovely
Apne is kavita me har ADMI ke dard ko batane ki koshish ki hai.
shayad Mere bhi
maaf karna shikha hum jyada kisi se involve nahi hote,par hum ek baat jaan na chahenge yeh jo kavita aapne likhi hai yeh bas likhi hai ki mehsus ki hai,gustakhi maaf karna thoda personal sawal hai,
yeh aapke liye:-
dard kafi hai seene me hum bataya nahi karte,
dafan hai khwab aako me kitne hum bataya nahi karte,nashili nigaho se hum jaam piya nahi karte,
marte marte hum muskurana bhulaya nahi karte…
Hello Shikha,
Behad Khubsoorat Likha Hai Aapne.. Wapai Aapki Yeh Rachna Dil
Ko Chhoo gai.. Kamaal ki Shayara Hain aap.. !!! 🙂 🙂
Behad Dard Bhara aur Ehasaason se Saja Kalaam Hai……!!!!!!!
Daad Kubool Karen…..
Aapka Dost
Vicky
nice
gaugious & gracefull
very good shikha ji kya baat hai pad kar kafi accha laga jo dard ke sath mehboob ka pyar isme dikha sach main dil ko choo gaya
hum to aap pe fida hogaye
Koi dikha ke roye koi chipa ke roye,
Hame rulane wale hame rula ke roye,
Marne ka maza to tab hai yaaro,
Jab katil bhi janaaze per aake roye
Mili hai bahut saza unhe dil lagane ki,
nazar lag gayi hamare pyar ko zamane ki
Kabar se nikale hue dono hath kahte hai,
arzoo rah gayi usko gale lagane ki
mitti meri kaber se chura raha hai koi ,
aaj fir mujko chu ker ja raha hai koi ,
ae khuda ek din ki zindgi aur de de mujhe ,
udaas meri kaber se ja raha hai koi……
Garmiye hasrate nakaam se jal jate hein,
hum charagou ki tarha shaam se jal jate hein..
Shama jis aag mai jalti hai numayesh ke liye,
hum usi aag mai gum naam se jal jate hein..
Jab bhi aata hai tera naam mere naam ke saath,
jane kyun log mere naam se jal jate hein…
Is anjnabi duniya mein,Akela ek khawaab hu,
Sawaalo se khafa,Chhota as jawaab hu,
Jo na samjh sake,Unke liye “KOUN”,
Jo samajh chuke,Unke liye kitaab hu ,
Duniya ki nazar mein,Jaane kyu chubha as,
Sabse nashili aur badnaam sharaab hu,
Sar uthakar dekho,Wo dekh raha hai tumko,
Jisko na dekha usne,Wo chamakta aaftab hu,
Aankh se dekhoge,To khush paoge,
Dil se poochoge,To dard ka sailaab hu ……..!
vo nadiya nahi thi ansu the mere
jis par TUM kasti chalate rahe
manzil mile tumhe ye dua thi meri
isliye hum ansu bahate rahe………………………….
Agar rakh sakho to 1 nishani hu main,
Aur kho do to sirf 1 kahani hu main,
Rok paye na jisko ye saari duniya,
Vo 1 boondh ankh ka paani hu main………….!!!!
mehfil saji thi jaam ka tha daur, jam me kya tha ye kisne kiya tha gaur,jaam me lahu tha mere armano ka,aur aap keh reh the ek aur ek aur……………
To Kahi bhi rahe tere sar ye elzaam to hai.
Tere haato ki lakiron mein mera naam to hai.
To mujhe apna bana-ya-na-bana teri khushi.
To mere naam se saare jamaane mein badnaam to hai.
Jidhar se bhi gujarta hun. Log tera naam leke pukaar te hai .
Mujhe khushi hai meri mohabbat ka ye anjaam to hai.
manzlain b us ki theen… rasta b us ka tha…. aik main akaila tha…. qafla b us ka tha… sath sath chalny ki…. soch b us ki thi… phir rasta badlny ka… faisla b us ka tha… aj kiun akeela hoon… dil sawal karta hai… log to usi k thay… kia KHUDA b us ka tha?…. i like this ghazal
Amal se bhi maanga wafa se bhi maanga.
Tujhay yaar teri raza se bhi maanga.
Na is se kuch mila to dua se bhi maanga.
Khuda ki qasam tujhay khuda se bhi maanga.
Mut pooch is ehsaas ki shidat se.
Maine to bursaat main jultay ghuro ko dekha hai.
manzlain b us ki theen… rasta b us ka tha…. aik main akaila tha…. qafla b us ka tha… sath sath chalny ki…. soch b us ki thi… phir rasta badlny ka… faisla b us ka tha… aj kiun akeela hoon… dil sawal karta hai… log to usi k thay… kia KHUDA b us ka tha?….
Har dil ke baaton me humne aap ko rakka hai,
gaur se dekho hamara chehra aap k dil main chupa rakka hai
wo rulana manakar hasana ,
hum ko samjana,
baato hi bato main apne sine lagana,
apni shararato ko hamare sine behlana,
kabhi chumte huwe pyar ko jatana,
is pyar main sath nibana us har pal ko yaadon me basana
gaur se dekho hum aap ke dil me yaad rehte hai
wo chahatein har din dil ko bechain karti hai,
jab b hum aap k pass rehna sake
WAH..!!
ACHHA LAGA AAPKO PADHKAR..
BHOOKHE NANGE KI ROTI CHHINAANE LAGE,
AAJ KE INSAAn BHI KYA-KYA KHAANE LAGE?
AAJ HUM APNA WO HI SABAK HAIn BHOOLE,
SEEKHNE ME JISE THE ZAMAANE LAGE..!!
G8t shikha ji…
ur frnd
Reema
NIce poetry !
• Wo yaron ki mehfil wo muskrate pal,
Dilse juda hai apna bita hua kal
Kabhi guzarti thi zindgi waqt bitane me,
Ab waqt guzar jata hai chand kagaz k note kamane me.
• Jahan ki gurbat me sukun nahi ayega,
Gam-e-tohin se kubul nahi ayega.
Maklul ki fitrat he ye kafir,
Dimag fat jayega par ye sher samajh nahi ayega.
• Har khomoshi mein ek baat hoti hai,
Har dil mein ek yaad hoti hai,
Aapko pata ho ya na ho par aapki khushi k liye roz fariyad hoti hai.
Awz mai therao tha ankho mai nami thi :
or keh rha tha maine sub kuch bhula DIYA
Bahot achche, lgta hy aapne jo likha hy aapke apne jazbat hy. such hy kya?
kya bat hai zanab.apne to kamal kr diya.ek mere trf se bhi arz hai,dil ki bato ko juban pe late nhi,hm apne dil ki bat kisi ko btate nhi,jkhm chahe kitne bhi gahre kyo na ho,hm dettol ke siva kuch lagate nhi
Ishq kamzor dil se kiya nahin ja sakta,
Zeher dushman se liya nahin ja sakta,
Dil mein basi hai ulfat jis pyar ki,
Us pyar ke bina jiya nahin ja sakta.
1 | keshav
April 2, 2007 at 4:59 am
Shikha ji,
Bahut behtereen aagaaz hai kavita ka.
Rula deti hai ye dard ki baatein
Kanhaiya Srivastava