24 Responses to "कैसे कहे कि रोये हम…"
A good one , keep writing…..
सुन्दर पंक्तियाँ
wah kya alfaz istmal kiye hai
gr8
you are a true lover of some one but your love could not understand your true love.i have kindly sympathy for you please tkc of your self.
Hi Shikha
Read Your work for the first time and it’s truly gud. The best being:
Jaane kyon na samjhey tum mere zazbaaton ko,
Hamne to rakh di hr khwaahish be-libaas kar ke ….
Wud Luve to read more of U
Keep Up The Gud Work!
Tke care
-Ramit
very good lines….i appreciate
i want friendship
do u like freindship
i m poem_fast@hotmail.com
good shikha is gr8
masha alla….. aap bahut khubsurat likhti hai
aaj ki raat mera dard e mohbbat sun le, kapkapate huye hoton ki shikayat sun le, aaj ijhaar khyaalat ka mauka de de.
Hi,
Excellent. hats off to ur shayaries
well, a creator like u shud nt weep….
but the content speaks oomph.
well written.
Read Your work for the first time and it’s truly gud. Fabulous awsum I have no words for ur pottery…. … I want more…
Can u give plzzzzzzzz…….. Shikha
1 | समीर लाल
April 19, 2007 at 4:09 pm
अच्छी रचना है, बधाई.