कुछ बाते अधूरी सी!!!
हमने महबूब की आँखों पर
हाथों को अपने रख कर देखा
नफ़रत के अंगारों को जब उनकी
नज़रों मे दहकता देखा
और उनही हाथों को िदल पर रख कर,
अपनी हसरतों को ख़ुद अपनी आँखों से जलता देखा
चाँद की तरह हमने प्यार को भी मरता देखा!!!
एक अजनबी सी नज़र दीवार को भेदती हुई,
एक उखड़ी हुई साँस िजगर को छेद़ती हुई
ख़ुद की तलाश मे भटक रही है रूह,
दो पल का भी नहीं जैसे मेरे नसीब मे सुकून
घर के साज़ो-समान को ख़ुद पर हमने हस्ते देखा
अपने वजूद को भी सजावट का सामान बनते देखा!!!
ह्र िरश्ते पर एक मौत ख़ुद की पाई है
बाज़ार मे जैसे बोली ख़ुद अपनी लगाई है
कोई ज़हर जैसे अपने हाथों पी िलया हमने,
ज़हर पी के भी मगर कैसे जी िलया हमने
खुली आँखों से कैसा ख़ौफ़नाक ये सपना देखा
कई ज़हरीले नागों को क़दमों से िलपटते देखा!!!
एक ही मंज़र ये ह्र रात का होता है
चाँद भी आकर मेरी छत पे रोता है
पलकों मे नमी होती है िबखरी िबखरी
िदल िफर भी नयी उमीद़ कोई िपरोता है
वोह तो तिक्ये को आगोश मे ले लेते है
जाने कैसे वो चैन की नींद सो लेते है
रात की रानी को कभी िखड़की पे महकता देखा
हमने रातों को आँखों आँखों मे गुज़रता देखा!!!
57 Responses to "कुछ बाते अधूरी सी!!!"
April 14, 2007 at 5:24 am
nice aap itna acha likhti hain ki mere jaisaa bore ladka bhi kavita padne laga hain jise iski abcd bhi nahi aati .hain aap huime aapke likha hua forward kare plz
April 19, 2007 at 12:06 pm
@ Rishi
I m so glad.. This is one of the best Appreciation 🙂
Thanks a lot for so much motivation. Do visit again, I will try more to improve myself… Bahut Bahut Shukriya aapka… 🙂
April 20, 2007 at 3:26 am
अच्छा है । हम सब कवि है । सबके भीतर कोई न कोई कविता होती है । बाहर आने दीजिए ।
June 10, 2007 at 4:00 am
Dil ki ye aarzoo thi koyi dilruba mile
Dekhen hamein naseeb se ab, apne kya mile
Ab tak to jo bhi dost mile, bewafa mile
Hamne udaasiyon mein guzaari hai zindagi
Lagta hai dar fareb bewafa se kabhi kabhi
Aisa na ho ke zakhm koyi phir naya mile
Ab tak to jo bhi dost mile bewafa mile
June 13, 2007 at 6:29 pm
It’s Sad …!
It’s sad to see one’s love denied
from the being that it is loved
with all the own strength
and for whom one would do
the most unthinkable sacrifices.
It’s sad to pour so many bitter tears
from a heart that is worn out
from the most unbearable grief
and that uselessly pants
to realize his own dream.
It’s sad to assist the continuous
torment of a soul that wanders…
lost in desolate regions,
where love has no possibility to bud.
It’s sad to perceive a dejected spirit,
that doesn’t have the strength
to react and to fight anymore,
after having been weakened
by love’s disappointment.
It’s sad to mourn at the death of a hope,
which had represented a most beautiful project,
because on it was founded our whole existence…!
Amanush…
July 6, 2007 at 10:06 am
Naa jaane iss dil mein aur kitne dard sanjoye baithe ho…….Naa jaane kitne zakhm sehkar muskurate rahete ho……..Khud toh doob chuke ho ashq-e-samandar mein……Aaj mujhe b apne sath rulaa baithe ho.
July 8, 2007 at 8:09 pm
I hv read some of ur collections,they r mind blowing.Thr r so many thoughts in my mind but im unable to convert it to words…….
August 9, 2007 at 3:53 am
@ Rajeev…
Thanks for sharing your Thoughts.. 🙂
Please keep visiting
August 9, 2007 at 3:54 am
@ Amanush
That’s Just Wow… 🙂
Very Nice Poetry… Very Touching…
Thanks a Lot…
August 9, 2007 at 4:04 am
@ Kamal
Thanks and a Very Nice one from You…
I liked it very much…
Ab Dard kitne bhi mile, hum aah na kareinge,
Magar ishq karne ka, phir gunaah na kareinge…
Ek baar Maut aaye to hans kar laga le gale se,
Kam se kam Phir hum, Kiston mein na mareinge…
April 7, 2015 at 8:55 pm
Ab dard kitne b mile, hum aah nA karenge
Magar iśhq Karne ka, Phir gunah Na karenge
Is baar maut aayi to haś kaR Laga lenge gale śe
Kam śe kAm phirśe Hm kiśton me to NA Marenge
Waaah Kya likha h
Zindabaad
Faaśle Kab kam huwen hain
In raśto kE baad bhi
Ajnabi they ajnabi hain
Mohabbat Ke baad bhi :))
aacha likhtin h aap
All the best for the future
September 20, 2007 at 9:03 am
Hi Shikha,
Have been reading your work for sometime now. First of all must say u write fantastic. I am a finance person so really can’t reply in your way but would really like to let u know that u have bundle of talent. If you say u are a beginer then i must tell u it is all the more commendable. What i like the most in your work is the sensitivity with which u write. Would definitely like to know the inspiration behind all this work.
September 26, 2007 at 6:56 pm
@ Shonali
Thanks for your valuable comments. I am glad u liked my work. Life itself is an Inspiration. Right naa… 🙂
October 7, 2007 at 1:29 pm
sisa chahe tut bhi jaye dil na kishi ka tut na paye sisa to fir mil jata hai dil nahi oo chij jo bazar me mil jaye shonali ji aap nahi hai oo chij jo bazar me mil jaye
bad_boy42049@yahoo.com
December 31, 2007 at 5:07 pm
hey shikha carry on…
u doing supevb work…
let the other say what they saying they are not worth talking..
January 18, 2008 at 7:24 am
Hasi ke raste pe chala karo,
khushiyo ki mahak liya karo,
pyar se dilon ko chuha karo,
jahan tumhe ghum nazar aaye,
is nacheez ko yaad kiya karo
February 23, 2008 at 7:43 am
Thanks a lot for appreciating my work… Badboy, Amit, Abhey and Chahat…
Chahat… Very nice lines by you too…
February 29, 2008 at 10:26 am
kavita chu gayi mere manko jese bahot kuch keh gayi muzse.bahoot achhe.
May 10, 2008 at 10:02 am
Excellent Work!
Per is tarah ka talent internet pe show karne ka ik nuksaan ye hai ki log aapki poems chura kar apne naam se post kar dete hai…..
June 20, 2008 at 2:48 pm
your each line even each word touches my heart. great
hoping for more
July 20, 2008 at 12:28 pm
Aape to rula hi diya.
Bahut muskil ha es tareha ke jajboto ko likna
Bahut kubb, Carry on in future.
hey…
memorized…
December 2, 2008 at 2:28 pm
gift
December 16, 2008 at 4:56 pm
@ Prmodpk
Indeed, each and every visit to my blog is a gift for me…
Thanks for your visit… 🙂
December 16, 2008 at 10:43 am
Excellent Work!
Per is tarah ka talent internet pe show karne ka ik nuksaan ye hai ki log aapki poems chura kar apne naam se post kar dete hai…..
?????
December 16, 2008 at 4:39 pm
Thanks a lot Sandesh Ji..
Yeah, People do copy them… and I always request to please mention my name with my work… Some do write my name with them.. but most of the time, people don’t bother to write the original poet / poetess name… Infact, this is very troublesome.. It hurts a lot… but, we could just hope for the change.. the change in thinking, the change in moral values, the change in attitude and a change for giving truth a chance… Let’s hope for the best… One day, all will be fine…
Keeping my fingers crossed… 🙂
December 16, 2008 at 4:54 pm
Hope It will happen oneday !!!
I hav seen a poem frm Bulleh shah on a blog …where the owner was claiming its own …….. how disgusting it is !!!
But should not care for this …after all they are publicizing your feelinf 🙂
Thanks for commenting on my blog !!!
keep in touch …. I believe I hav to learn ” How to write romantic poems ” from you …….:)
December 16, 2008 at 5:04 pm
@ Sandesh..
Yeah… Its so disgusting so many people claim themselves as Bulleh Shah, Mirza Galid, Niza Fadli and Gopal das “Neeraj”… lolzzzz… Why can’t they respect them, I could never understand..
Well… if they publicize feeling they should tell naa.. ki its not their feeling, they are acting fake on someone’s behalf.. 🙂
By the way, I believe, you are far.. far and faaaaaaaaaaaaaaar good writer than me… In fact, I should attend some classes from you in writing poetry.. Can I???
January 21, 2009 at 7:15 pm
Ati sunder …bahut khoob…..aapki dayri k ye panne….
Baar -baar padhne ko jee karta hai…….
Kya ye kahin aur bhi prakashit huye hain….besides yoindia..
KOI sankalan chhapaya hai aap ne…..
Anaam
January 24, 2009 at 5:10 pm
Poetry is also a form of devtion , I really wonder how come u call yourself an amateur for me you r already a “PRO” but I wish u cud have changed your decisions since we would be at loss for not being able to enjoy your work now…………………..
Think about it as i ahve already commented earlier !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
February 9, 2009 at 5:59 pm
. Ji raha hun apne dard de jigar aur toota dil lekar,
kisi ko kaise kahen rokar jii rha hun ya huskar,
vo mujhe aur meri zindagi ko hi pta hai,
kaise jee rha hu yahan tadap tadap kar,
roya hua dil bhi kabhi hasa karta tha,
jab is zalim duniya se unjaan tha,
apno ko bhi hum apna na sake,
gairon ko bhi hum gair bana na sake,
jise pooja us pathar ko hum paa na sake,
shayad naseeb mein yahi tha,
meri zindagi kisi ke kabil ban na saka…………….
March 11, 2009 at 9:42 pm
Fantastic…
Shikha..Carry on..really…dilse likha he..1bat kahu..kahi aapne zindgiko ghot gehrai se jaaka he…shayd itni gehraise insan tab hi jak sakta he..jab wo khud hi in sacchaiose juj raha ho..pls bhale tum achise shayri likho per itni gehraiome na jana..k tum khud tum na raho..really..fantastic…
take care..
bye
March 12, 2009 at 8:18 am
Kya dard hai. Bahut Khoob. koshish jari rakhen aur khoob likhen. aapke ashaar hame kisi ki yaad dila jatey hain
June 29, 2009 at 2:20 pm
di u r gr8 .ur poems r too good.
read this i hve also composed some poems—-
I WAS ALL ALONE
WHEN I WAS ALL ALONE,
I CAME TO THIS SELFISH WORLD,
AS I WAS BORN AS A BABY GIRL,
EVERYONE LEFT ME ALL ALONE.
I GOT LOVE OF MY PARENTS
WITH LOADS AND LOTS OF DENTS,
I STARTED WALKING FOR FIRST TIME,
STILL I WAS ALL ALONE.
WHEN I FALL DOWN,
AND TOUCHED THE GROUND,
MY MOTHER HOLD MY HAND,
PUSHED ME FORWARD AND,
AGAIN LEFT ME ALL ALONE.
I BECAME A BIG GIRL NOW,
JOIN THE SCHOOL THEN AND HOW,
EVERYONE MAKE THEIR OWN GROUP,
I WAS STILL ALL ALONE.
I GOT TO KNOW WHAT THE ACTUAL WORLD IS,
WHEN I WAS LEFT ALL ALONE,
I FINISHED MY SCHOOLING,
WITH ENJOY AND KIDDING.
I ENTERED THE HARSH WORLD OF COLLEGE,
WHERE I MET UPS AND DOWNS,
WITH MY INTELLIGENCE AND FOULS,
WHEN I WAS LEFT ALL ALONE.
THERE I MET GOOD FRIENDS,
WHO HELPED ME AT EACH STAGE,
BUT AT THE END OF COLLEGE,
THEY ALSO LEFT ME ALL ALONE.
NOW I AM A FULLY MATURE GIRL,
UNDERSTANDS THE CONSEQUENCES AND HURDLES,
NOW IT DOESN’T MATTERS FOR ME,
IF ANYONE LEFT ME ALL ALONE.
July 22, 2009 at 8:05 am
Ek aisi kavita jo dil ko chhu gayi…. Thank hame hamare bachpan jhalkiya dikhane ke liye
July 25, 2009 at 7:32 pm
Jiya h aapne hus kr Dukh k palo ko
Na jane Kyu Zindgi se aapko Khafa Dekha,
khushi hoti h kya lgta h Bhul gye ho,
Kisi ne aapke Sapno ko na Dekha,
tufffan to Sirf sagar me hi aate h aur
Hmne aapke Dil me bhte ek Sagar ko Dekha!!!
hasrat h kuch yu aapse mulqat ki
Dekha h hazaro ko per Tumsa na Dekha…
August 24, 2009 at 2:58 pm
aakhiri line
हमने रातों को आँखों आँखों मे गुज़रता देखा!!!
dil ko chhu gayi
October 14, 2011 at 11:55 am
very nice………say can i share this at facebook ?……
Ok…..i m doing with ur page link…thnx in advance
http://www.facebook.com/badnamshayar
October 3, 2015 at 9:28 pm
Shikha Ji… namaskar
meri bahur saari kavya rachnaaye hai mujhe geeta ka saara sloke compleatly learn hai jiska mai hindi me kavya ka roop de raha hu aur bhi meri bahut saari rachnaye hai samaj kanun desh aur student farmers aur bhagwan ke oopar pls mujhe ye sab sabko sunane ka chance de pls ek 11th class ke bachhe ka aapse request hai
September 2, 2016 at 8:07 am
Mera ek fnd hamesa kuch batata rahta tha… bahut khub ki gajal, shayari ke bare me
Aaj padha maine vaksyi hi kya gajal banayi hai aapne.,,,, mere dil me jagah bn gyi kisi ke pyar ke liye jo meri n ho saki….. Bahut khub
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April 4, 2007 at 7:58 pm
Di aap ko hum maan gaye Ji!!